2007年5月7日 星期一

Compare and contrast living in an apartment and in the dormitory

_____My first experience of living outside from my parents has begun since I went to Taipei for study. The first two year of my university life, I'd been lived in the dormitory. But now I've been living in an apartment with my other four classmates. Of course, each one has advantages and disadvantages lying within simultaneously. I think the differences between living in an apartment and in the dormitory are privacy, cost, and environmental hygiene. Living in an apartment has more privacy than living in the dormitory. Usually, one room in the dormitory contains four or five people at most. And it's an open area that every action could be seen in the eyes. So if you need more privacy, an apartment offers more personal space than dormitory. Also, the costs of living in an apartment are definitely more expensive, which include not only the monthly rent but the everyday expenses, such as LNG (liquefied natural gas), eating, and transportation fee. On the campus of NTUST, we students seem to be quite self-contained in some way. We can eat and buy most necessities cheaply without leaving the campus. In contrast with dormitory, things can only be bought with the market prices when living away from campus. At last, as far as the environmental hygiene, dormitory is better than an apartment. In the dormitory, all we have to do with the garbage is to throw them in the garbage cans, and then someone would take them out for us. However, living in an apartment, we have to do it all by ourselves. So personally, I don't know which one to choose from if both of them are available. But I think dormitory is an unique experience that everyone should go through in their lives.

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NEPTUNE 提到...

寫的不錯,3點理由寫的蠻多的,1.2點算是完整了,第3點關於環境衛生,我的看法與你不同,我覺得宿舍大家擠在一間房間,反而容易髒亂,在外面公寓的話,雖然大家一起住,不過自己應該有自己的房間,環境衛生可以自己控制的,該誰丟垃圾,大家都是朋友應該也是能夠分配的。
我想原因應該不只這3點,可是你3點就已經寫這麼長了。我覺得可以再多提出一些論點,理由的部分可以精簡且完整,那這樣文章內容不至於太長且可以豐富一些。
我不知道這樣對不對,我覺得因為這個題目的論點蠻多的,應該能夠多寫一些,一個論點差不多2.3句話解釋完整。
另外,結論怪怪的,與題目沒什麼關係的感覺。


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